Unfortunately, I did not receive feedback from the first pitch (it's ok, my feelings are not hurt), however, after watching the lecture where the pitches were critiqued, I used those tips to improve my pitch. I removed unnecessary words, added a price and hopefully did a better job than the first time.
Friday, March 20, 2020
17-A Elevator Pitch No. 2
Unfortunately, I did not receive feedback from the first pitch (it's ok, my feelings are not hurt), however, after watching the lecture where the pitches were critiqued, I used those tips to improve my pitch. I removed unnecessary words, added a price and hopefully did a better job than the first time.
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Hey Stacey! I did not watch your first elevator pitch, but I did like this one a lot. I thought that you hooked the audience well by setting a scene, and by going through the rest of the potential scenario, you kept peoples' attention and formed a sense of ethos by creating emotions. I think your pitch was great and I also think your idea for a business is great!
ReplyDeleteHi! You did a great job with your pitch! You had a great hook and were professional throughout the whole thing. You kept my attention throughout you pitch as well. Great Job!
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